It looks like you cut straight across. You might try angling down a bit or putting a radius on the sides to make the corners less extreme. That is what I did on mine and it looks a lot better than straight across. If you don't mind doing the work, there is still more shield you can take off. IMO, the stock shield was way too tall.
If you get it right, it will actually look better than the original screen, more like the classic bikini fairing/shields of the 60's. Get you that cafe look without hacking off the rear loop.